Rough Stuble Cut and Feedback

'Ere is our rough cut. It's very sketchy and confusing, but at least we've got something down :)



has some glitches and stuff as well as not being complete so sorry about thatttt

ROUGH FEEDBACK.

>Here is some feedack from our rough cut....

> Genre and Use of conventions <
"We think you have captured genre and conventions of it." -And what does that mean?
"Footage conveys genre well!"
"Footage fits genre really well."

> Performance <
"Performances was lively, fitted the song well."
"Good balance of crowd + band."
"Really good lypsincking-most of the way through."
"Good lipsycing with more than one person."

> Mise en scene <
"Good location. Works really well as a theme."
"Styalised band, we like how its's not traditional. "
"Change of location on the areas work well."
"Good setting used."

> Camerawork <
"Good range of angles, close ups etc, keeps it interesting."
"Good variety"

> Editing <
"Slowed footages works really well. Adds dimention"
"Use of a variety of editing techniques was effective"

> Suggestions for additional footage <
"Fill in the black gaps :)"


>Tanya's Feedback...

"Dynamic vs Static"
"Single lipsynch narrative - for close ups"
"Movement in edit - many mid shots"
"More speed differential or edit"
"Other cut aways and effects - camera movement"


Thanks everyone :D
Tom and Alex